Tuesday, August 31, 2010
All Blacks VS South Africa
I was excited
and ready to have fun
I was hoping the all blacks would win
The whistle blew
You could feel the nervous air around the stadium
Everybody was tense
And so was I
I have been looking forward to this game for weeks
The Grudge match against South Africa and New Zealand
A win for the All blacks would put them ever so closer to the Tri Nations title
I yelled out loud “Go All Blacks”
The game was exciting
And before you know it it was half time
The second half was underway
Everyone was cheering
The crowd started a mexican wave
It went around the stadium three times but then it died out
The game was getting exciting the All Blacks were starting to score points
And at the same time scoring great tries
The game was nearly over
The All Blacks got the ball and scored a great try
The All Blacks had won
Everyone in the stadium was screaming
The All Blacks had won against South Africa once again
What a great game!
By Strom
Michael Rosen Poems
In our class we have been writing Michael Rosen Poems to extend our knowledge in poetic writing styles. These are our two poems.
I have always liked soccer.
No matter how hard I try
I can never let a ball go
without smashing it into the back of a goal.
Today I am trialing for a spot in the Nelson team
to go to Blenheim and have a good time.
When I hopped out of my car I thought
“ There’s not too many here, I may have a chance”
But 5 minutes later they all started to get here.
And I mean all started to get here.
There were around 60 kids there of all shapes and sizes and now I thought
“What have I gotten myself into Sam.”
(excerpt from Sam's poem)
Event: First Day of School
I looked through the big metal gates,
Dreaming and thinking about all that could be,
I looked to the left,
Looked to the right,
I saw lots of buildings stacked up nice and high,
I saw children bustling and playing,
With gleeful smiles stretched wide across their faces,
Mum opened the gate,
I cautiously walked forward,
Not knowing where to go,
Just following my feet,
I walked into one of those high buildings,
Hung my bag on an empty hook,
Pushed open the door.
It was warm and toasty inside,
Ms Dawkins greeted me at the door with a cheerful “good morning”,
I sat on the mat with my legs crossed,
Arms crossed,
Eyeing up the rest of the class,
We learn our ABC’s,
And count to three,
The bell has gone that means the day has passed,
In comes Mum to pick me up,
I look over my shoulder for a final glance,
But I know I’ll be back tomorrow though,
At that moment I knew this was the place for me.
By Nikau
our poems from Michael Dan
here's Michaels
Day of the smiggle robbery
It all started one morning ..........
I was at Mapua school thinking to myself I’m gonna play with my smiggle rubber.
When it happened I look in my pencil case it was gone
That’s when the investigation began
I called my team of trained detectives, Hayden, Jordan and Myself.
We were to bring down the suspects one by one.
First we searched Hayley's desk
People saying they saw her with it and she was away
So it was a lot easier than we expected, but Hayley has helpers like Laura and Ellie .
But we got nothing nothing!
We will get them both tomorrow.
The next day Hayley I asked Where is it? I know you know were it is
“Fine here you go" she gets it out and gave it back
Every one was happy until!
"Again it’s gone again"
Hayden says it must be Hayley, Laura or Ellie again
But Jordan says no I know that they really want it, but I think somebody else has done it this time.
We will see if it was them anyway.
I was very convinced that they did it
We were busy arguing when Dan walked in as they were saying you will never find it!
When Dan pulls it out of his pocket
Yes they will never find it!
We all laughed I got it back and we enjoyed the rest of our day.
by Michael
here's Dans
Mountain Biking
Mountain biking with the cold wind seeping through your jersey
You pedal the whole way down the mountain as you fly into the burms
throwing you around the corner as you fly
Up to the jump with a huge rush of adrenaline flowing through your body
With your heart pounding you hit the landing with another rush of relief
As you know you’ve landed successfully as you keep on peddling you come to a straight
You pedal harder as you hit the burm
You gear out
You know you’re putting in 100 % effort in
You see another burm you know you have to slow down or you are
Going to it getting closer and closer you get to it and
You lock on the brakes as you hit the burm
Slow right down but now you have to build up all you speed again
It’s not the safest sport but
It is one of the most fun things to do in your spare time
By Dan
Michael Rosen Poems
Michael Rosen Poems
SNOW DAY
I like snow day
I had to get up at 6:00 so that I would not miss out.
Hurry up I yelled my granddad was going to take me and Kelly to school so that some parents could take us up skiing. We arrived there in about ten minuets at school I said good bye to my granddad and I walked down to Room 8 and waited for the other people to arrived when every one had arrived they started to brief everyone witch is just a fancy word for telling everyone what to do then we got in to are cars.
It toke a long long long [now keep saying long for about an hour] and then finely we got there we had to meet in a little hut. were we had to go into our groups my instructors name was george I thought he was tall. We had to go and get are boots and skis. We had to have a 90 minuet lesion we learnt how to tern and stop then he toke us up the intermediate slope that was fun then we had the rest of the day to go up and down up and down up and down the slopes and I only fell down two times
By Keegan
THE END
By Storm and Patrick
Michael Rosen style poems!
The Last Day of Term
I’m always excited when the last bell rings
I can run outside and do all my things
I run out the gates full of glee
Finally I can run around wild and free.
I go and see my Mum and Dad
We go down to the wharf and get an ice cream
We play tag and play on the beam
C’mon I yelled
lets play on the beach
We saw a fish, it was just out of reach.
We drive on home
Past the school
That place seriously isn’t cool
Now we go past the dairy
The lady in there is really hairy
We’re back at home
I pick up the phone
I call my Granny
I say it’s the holiday!
By Hayden
My life
HI my name is Jordan and Im all ways sad
is it because my parents are mad
why is that so bad. I’ve a cousin
his name is chad he’s all ways glad.
I step out and look at the sea and think
why my parents are so mean
what’s wrong with me and what am
I doing here and what are you doing there why are my feet so bear
and why do you have so much hair.
My name is Jordan and Im all ways mad
is it because my parents are mad.
Michael Rosen style poems ❀
This week we did some research on Michael Rosen, then we used the information that we gathered to put together an effective and descriptive poem to express our feelings through a Michael Rosen style poem. Then we had present the poems to the class, each poem that was presented had its own individuality but still was based on Michael Rosen. It was interesting to find out about how he likes to perform his poems to adults as well as children and goes around to schools to help other students express their feelings through poetic writing. It was a lot of fun in the pr0ccess.
Lid&Luc :)
Micheal Rosen Poems
I think you would all agree that the Micheal Rosen Poems were great fun to brainstorm, write, and read out to the class.
The last few days, Room 11 has been looking at the work from the famous poet, Micheal Rosen.
Our task was to design a poem that explains one of the things/moments in life when we felt happiest.
There where great Ideas like, First day back at school, Soccer or rugby Rep team try outs and loads more.
Here's an example
The Beach
I wandered by the water
and wondered what there’d be.
A crab,a fish,a tadpole
Or things to small to see.
As I looked into the water
What then did I see?
All those curious little creatures
Staring back at me!
I took a walk along sand and I meet
hermit crab I watched him scurry on the sand
to find a house that’s second-hand
He crawls in someone else’s shell
And stays because it fits him well.
We have loads more poems like this one.
It was great fun.
By Jeanine and Jess.
Michael Rosen Poems
I love Easter I’ve always have.
Every morning every night, I think about it all the time.
When its Easters eve, I think about it so hard I burst into thousand of fleas.
Now its time to say good night, good dreams are coming tonight.
Its 6:30 I can’t hardly sleep I’m so excited I can’t even speak.
Half an hour later, I’m finally awake, its easter!!!
As I hoped out of bed I can already smell the goodness of rich chocolate.
My Mum and Dad were out already out they said to me “go and have a look in the bag you'll find lollies there”.
As I opened my bag I saw nothing there, I looked around the room as I saw my dad grinning with a laugh, What had happened last night!
By Laura T :) :0
MY PINK TUTU . . .
I made cake in my fluffy tutu!!!!!!
my tutu was pink as a bubblegum
I have a pink strawberry stocking that I wear
Now their covered in sticky chocolate
What do I do?
I can’t tell mom,
I can’t tell dad,
I can’t tell my sister,
I can’t tell my brother.
My tutu It’s all sticky,
It use to be pink,
But now It’s brown but yum It’s chocolate.
The cake is yummy.
It taste like creamy chocolate,
It’s so gooey
It’s stuck to my teeth
Is It meant to be gooey?
Its very sticky I feel sick, to much chocolate
I guess I should tell mom?
Or dad,
Or my sister,
Or my brother.
Should I tell or should I not.
By Cacilda and hana
Micheal Rosen Poems
POI!
The first time I touched that poi
I knew it was for me
I held it in my hands
And swung it in delight
Tried to catch it I don’t know what happened
But it hit me in the face!
I knew I wasn’t great
But I know I soon will be
As we learned
How to use the poi
I knew that it wasn't hard
and If I practiced I could be as good as good
So I practiced some moves
Over and over
Until my arm was nearly broken
And found that I can,
Use that poi
Now I can do it well
And are teaching others
In Kapahaka!
Done By Lucy.H
What if.. I stay up all night? What will happen? Will I get a fright? Maybe Santa will not come and then everyone will call me a bum. Maybe I should just get some rest because tomorrow I will do my very best. I am really excited I have definitely run out of breath! Now all is left is to get a good night rest!.
By Hayley
Weren't they great!! Great job Lucy and Hayley, you worked hard on them.
Done by Hayley and Lucy H
My own holiday Michael Rosen style poems
My own holiday
Fun
No brother
No sister
No house work
No home work
Just all me
My holiday started with
Movies,games of soccer,
Riding billy man walking up
With rocky boy on the end of your bed
Taking weird and bazar pictures
What’s not to like
You feel happy,free,great,fanatic
All at the same time.
You wake up with sounds
Of the chickens in your ear
And the sound of the birds
When you walk down the stairs
You feel like nothing can stop you that day
So where am I .I hear you say
I could be any where france china and many more but for now
I with just stick in my head as long as i use my imagination i can dream it all UP IN BED.
by Renee & Ellie
This is our one we hope you enjoy this poem.
Micheal Rosen
We all wrote Micheal Rosen poem's mine was on Panthers....
To see the muscles ripple beneath the night black fur,
I say “what a creature, with those yellow gleaming eyes”,
I twist to watch that magnificent creature circling me,
It disappears into the night playing with my mind,
I see a flash of yellow, then a black bullet,
I hear a rustle, then a snapping twig,
I feel those eyes watching my every move.
I think its coming, I think I'm dead,
I yell into the night “come out and face me”
I stomp on the ground when all is quiet.
It is coming, it stalks me, I hear the hissing of it breath on my neck,
I feel the sharp claws rip me to the ground,
I turn to face the panther of the night. I think its in front of me,or behind?
I let out a cry of pain and anger as the gleaming white claws slice my back to ribbons,
I swing a fist but it only slices the air where the panther had been,
It sprints along the barren treetops I see it, now I don’t I hear the air slush behind me I feel the the serrated teeth grasp my neck
Now I don’t feel,Now I don’t hear , ,Now I don’t talk, Now I’m dead.
Kynan
Wednesday, August 25, 2010
Term 3 - Week 7 Newsletter/Home Learning....
Hi guys, early this week for putting the newsletter on the blog! Congratulations to our Yr 8 BP Technology Challenge Team who came second in the Motueka Cluster competition and first in one of the challenges - great team work and lateral thinking!
Tuesday, August 24, 2010
Term 3 - Week 6 Newsletter/Home Learning....
Soccer
ski day
Gym was on Thursday 19 august 2010.
Gym was exciting everyone was excited.
We all had butterflies in our tummies.
Everyone got involved in the activities and enjoyed it.
Now it was our turn to do our floor routine and i reckon we did good better than our practices.
We got 49 points out of 100 even though we didn't win we still had a lot of fun.
GO GYM!!!!!!!!!!
Ski Day
Gymnastics
Thursday the 19th was an awesome day!!! Some of us went skiing :P, while the rest did...
GYMNASTICS!! :D We were all ready to go and came to school and double checked on the dance and our floor and stuff, then we set off, we all had the excitement and knew that on the day, we would be perfect! We arrived and warmed up with none other than ZUMBA! :P It was er, cool.
But after that, the real challenges, first up, floor one we all did great on that! Then vault, little scary, but we managed to pull it off! We had a break and ate all of Ellie's biscuits, then back onto beam! We were all good on that, but lucy (me) couldn't chasse, but at least I finished it and got good marks. Then long vault, we ALL did handstands, no matter how scared we were, and we all succeded! WOOP WOOP! Then floor 2, Cacilda did the demo, and then lunch, we all had a nice big wedge of Lydia's cake and the rest, after lunch we had to wait a while until it was our turn to do the team floor! It was really cool, we may not have got a placing, but we all still came away with a big smile on our faces :).
By Lucy and Jess
Snow day
Gymnastic
We didn't come 1st 2nd or 3rd but we did around 6th or s0mething like that. We all had a really good day so it didn't really matter what pace we came because we know that we did our best!
Thursday, August 5, 2010
Term 3 - Week 4 Newsletter/Home Learning....
Tuesday, August 3, 2010
Decision Time!!!
Written by Sam and Hayden
College Visits
Storm and Jake
Cool Schools....
Michael + ??????
College Vists
By Alice and Lucy
College Visits
Decisions, decisions......
Colleges.....Where to go! ♥
As you know us year 8's have to make a big step up ☝ to college and the decision of where to go is not easy.☹ There are so many choices and all the schools around here are brilliant!☺ Most of the open nights have already been held, they were interesting and informative. Still to come though is the Nelson Collage and The Nelson Collage for girls open night. Lydia and I, are both thinking of going to Nelson College for Girls as it has a wide range of opportunities and is located in a convenient place. We are both really nervous and excited about making that big step of going up to college and working in a year 9 atmosphere. Its going to be a new adventure and we are looking forward to it.❤
❀ Lid & Lucy x ❀